Maroon
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Post by Maroon on Dec 9, 2009 13:47:48 GMT -5
Maroon, a large, smart stallion was here, to claim the land as his. He was 16 hh high, and was red roan. He had a snow white star upon his forehead, just above his light brown eyes. He had no socks, and no other markings. His mane and banner swayed with the passing wind of which he ran up against. He reached his destination and reared high, auds up and forelegs kicking wildly as if he were fending off a dangerous predator. He whinnied his deep voice in claim.
"I, Maroon, claim this land as mine! It shall be named Paraíso Celestial!" he spoke the mane. He landed gently and thought about how he would maintaine the land, and about what kind of mares he would meet and how they would like this land if they agreed to come with him. He didn't, however, think about who would be lead mare. Nobody could dare replace his beloved Vedica.
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This land is larger than most and is beautiful as ever. Meadows and prairies dot the land. There is a forest to the north and surrounding mountians all around. There is only way in through the mountain pass. The grass here is golden and knee high. There is a regular breeze that sweeps the land.
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Post by +WHISPER+ on Dec 10, 2009 14:24:29 GMT -5
.N O T. A C C E P T E D.
Savanna's are always flat. No hills. And yes, there will be snow and cold to fear. Fix it, please.
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Maroon
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Post by Maroon on Dec 11, 2009 17:03:37 GMT -5
Fixed.
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